Assignments

This is all my assignments that I did at class 


Chain Writing- Found you!




A twin was born in a hospital but one of them got switched with a different baby but nobody knew. The babies looked the exactly  the same so this is the reason why they didn't know. Time went by. The babies grew up and became 14.

One day, Misha ( the boy who didn't get switched) went to Oxford for a family trip. One day, Ben ( the wrong baby) went to the park with Misha. Suddenly, Ben wanted to go to the toilet so he went to the toilet alone. When he came out, he ran to Josh ( the baby who got switched) thinking it was Misha. "Misha!" Ben said. "I am not Misha, I am Josh." "Oh, sorry." Ben turned around and found Misha. Misha realized something was up, so Ben told him about it. Misha saw Josh as well and decided to tell his parents. After Ben an d Misha told them, their parents decided to meet Josh. They asked him where he was born and when. It was exactly same as Misha and Ben's! They wanted to make sure so they went to the hospital. They were right. They accidently switched them. Ben and Josh were shocked. But Ben didn't wanted to leave.

 So, they decide to live as a 5 family including Josh. Of course they felt a bit awkward for the whole first week. But after that , they soon became more and more comfortable.


Reflective Essay (Spring)
Part 1


Part 2
I am going to talk about  the movie, 'Spring' (above). It was a about a boy who tied a rock around three animals. His master saw him doing it and did the same thing to him to teach him a lesson. He said "If one of the animal is dead, I am not going to untie it from you." but the tow of them were already dead.

 I had lots of experiences like this. When I did something wrong, my mom always asked me this. " How would you feel if someone did this to you?" Then I become really quiet.... 'Hmm....' I think about it then realize that it would be really annoying and dreadful. Because I have done a lot of thinking like this since I was little, I keep thinking about this before I do something. 

 For example, I once hit my brother for touching my things without any permission. I was so angry because I hate it when a person do things to me or my things without any kind of permission whatsoever. I get really mad and hit  and get into a fight ( I used to). Then my mom came to us. If she didn't well maybe I wouldn't have stopped. She told me the same question above, " I understand that you are mad at you are brother but you do this too sometimes and imagine your brother hit you.You will be really mad right? He said sorry so why don't you say sorry to him?" so I did. I did feel kind of mean and guilty for that one. This is what always happens in my house but nowadays I don't hit my brother or anything it is just talking fight.

 I think the boy should have thought about what he would have felt like if he was the animal. He should have done the thing I always did. I couldn't help feeling at the boy. He killed life just because he wanted to have some 'fun'. He doesn't know how important a life is.

 The boy did things that he thought that was fun and made the animals die. He doesn't know how important life is but it is a good thing that he got to know what he did was wrong. This video taught me how important life is and that we should think 'How would I feel if I am being like this.' before we do things before thinking.



Project about Kony: http://invisiblechildren.com/
http://www2.wsls.com/news/2012/mar/14/local-expert-speaks-out-kony-2012-video-calls-it-o-ar-1766752/
Hello everyone.Today, I am goingto talk about the video 'Kony 2012' ( you can see it on the bottom). after I saw this video, I strongly agreed that we had to make him famous so he can be caught. Kony have been kidnapping children in Uganda and making them into child soldiers. We need to catch him before he have even more authority.
Kony
invisible children

 Hello everyone.Today, I am going to talk about the video 'Kony 2012' ( you can see it on the bottom). after I saw this video, I strongly agreed that we had to make him famous so he can be caught. Kony have been kidnapping children in Uganda and making them into child soldiers. We need to catch him before he have even more authority.  
 To start with, if he doesn't get caught in 2012 he will create even more army of kids. he already has 60,000 to 100,000 children there so we have to let the world know by this video as quickly as we can.

 Moreover, it will be very sad if Kony doesn't get caught when we have done all this work to catch him. All our efforts would become nothing. We don't want the world and ourselves to think that we have just wasted our time. Many celebrities like Taylor Swift, Justin Bieber and Rhiannon gave their time to us so we need to pay them back by catching him.
 In addition, we have to let the world know about him ( by spreading the video) before December 2012. the US president ( Barak Obama)  will change, and he is the one who supported capturing Kony. If he is not caught in 2012, he may never be caught. We need to make him famous to catch him. We need to let the world know about him.

 Some people might think making him famous by this video is not a good idea, but here is the thing, if the whole world know about him, we'll have even more supporters so it will be easier to catch him.

For all these reasons, I think that making him famous is good. Te world will know about him and support us and the 'Invisible Children' ( website is on bottom.) Why don't you see the video 'Kony 2012' now., and write if it is a good idea or not.



















































3 Things that I know to Be True

This is a little bit of information about me. It includes hobbies and what makes me happy. After you read mine, why don't you write your own in the 'comment'.

I like playing hockey. First, playing hockey makes me healthy. Second, it helps me to grow taller. Third, it helps me to make new friends, because e have to pass to each other and win. 
Listening to music relaxes me. It calms me down. Because I listen to music since I was 3, it is very familiar to me. I feel like I did when I was a baby.
I am so happy!!!!
The economy is fun to learn. I started to get interested in it when I read a book called 'Economy Note'. That book explained what economy was. It also talked about that economy decides a wealthy country and an unwealthy country. After seeing this, I wanted to be an economist and build Korea's economy. 

This is the three things that I know to be true. These things make the happy. Now you know mine, why don't you write yours? I will write back to you.

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  1. Hi, I'm your writing TA Chanjung. As I read your essays, I was able to figure out that you are such a passionate person who love hockey, music, and economy. What a diverse interest! I think, however, that there still is some space left for your writing to improve.

    1. I want you to make indentations before your start a new paragraph. An indentation means that you leave 5 blanks before the first sentence of a paragraph starts. It will make the paragraph look better and help readers notice that a new paragraph has just started.

    2. I want you to explain some more about each part of your hobbies and interests. Though you wrote some about your feelings, you didn't put examples enough that the essay looks a bit weak and unsubstantiated. So, include some nice episodes or real examples to invigorate your essay.

    Don't be afraid of making mistakes! Good Luck!

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  2. Thank you for sharing. your writing is interesting and i enjoyed it. However, it is too short. Try to add details to your paragraphs thinking about the 5 w's (who, what etc.) The paragraphs should also have spaces between them.
    Keep up the good work!

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    1. Thank you for the good advice! I'll use it on my next assignments.

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  3. Cindy,
    I can not read your post as the type is vertical on the page for Kony. Please fix it and let me know when you do so I can check it.

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    1. I forgot to log off so someone changed it. but it is all okay now.

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  4. Hello Cindy your reflective essay is really good.. but I can't read your Joseph Kony essay...

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    1. This is very weird. When I come, it is okay but when other people come, it is all weird.

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  5. Hi Cindy,
    Your reflective essay is very good. You gave good examples and related them to your life. Keep up the good work!

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    1. of course i will!
      i will try my best till the end.

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